- Erotic Poetry
- b - In Submission
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b - In submission
By Rorykb
What I want-
No arguments, No dispute
Listen to Me, just Me
Action follows My commands
Touch Me only when I want you to,
Your eyes never leave Me, looking for what to do next
Lips allowed to part
Charged to make a request
Beg Me to continue
Culmination
The pleasure
The pain
Now I permit you to trace your lips over My fingers
Open and touch with the tip of your tongue
You kneel before Me, eyes closed, Me in your mouth
One finger at a time, you taste Me
In Submission
I command, lovingly
My will, your want, your desire
Sounds like a request, you know it is not
you would give freely, but I take - as is My right
Ordered to serve
My pleasure, My every thought
Wicked thoughts, some would say.
Pleasure for both of us
Different view points
Pain bringer, pleasure acceptor.
Take what I want, it is Mine
Brutal, maybe
Have My way with you,
you smile inside
For you have given freely
In Submission
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 10 years agoI can so feel the love in this. I think the whole BDSM thing is a little weird myself, but if it works for you then more power to you I guess. And I can definitely feel the love behind the words. Who ever B is, they are a lucky person. I wish I had someone who loved me, this way or anyway.
