- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Bach's Lunch
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Click hereHave a nibble on a Toccata
just right for a Suite tooth
Dance a Sarabande while munching-
a Courante will also do
Make partitions from a Partita
while creating your culinary Invention
Just a Prelude to the main dish
a Mass of confectionary delight
accompanied by a side dish Variation
sizzling with juicy Passion
a Concerto of love
a Cantata of joy
a Sonata of hope
But please-
don't throw away the Bachs
Mozart's on the menu tomorrow!
- COMMENTS
swallowedscreamover 16 years agoDelightful. Perhaps I am possessed of a pedestrian mind, but I thought it perfect. Although I respect the opinions of others who have commented, I did not have any problems with this piece. Well done!
LeBrozabout 17 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.
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duddle146over 17 years agoBeing a Jazz musician I feel like this is old home week and consider it a distinct delight to review this poem. I, of course loved and got a kick out of Mr. Sack's musical terms and great sense of humor. Bravo Mr. Sack!
Anonymousover 18 years agoVery similar to what a middle school student did a few years ago. That one received a passing grade. I guess yours does, too, although you are well past middle school.
