- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Bad Day
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You will have to excuse me
If I act out of sorts today
I seem to be out of touch with everything
I noticed this morning
When I put the milk in the cupboard
And the cereal in the fridge
I tried to take a shower
Turned on cold instead of hot
I put my pants on backwards
And my tee-shirt inside out
My shoes on the wrong feet
And forgot my watch
As you can tell
Today hasn't gone well
If I'm lucky I'll forget
That I'm going to work
Head back home
And go back to bed.
- COMMENTS
WickedEveover 15 years agoI like this. Those first few lines, down to the part about putting the milk in the cupboard, are really good. Not sure, but I think you almost give to many examples of how you're out of sorts. I'd like to read a little bit about why you're probably having a bad day.
Anonymousover 15 years agoThis poem is mentioned in today's New Poem Review in the Poetry Feedback & Discussion forum. Thanks for the read!
