Bad Memory

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Belegon
Belegon
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I know there was a time
I lived
without your love
but did the morning air
taste so cold?
Did the coffee
so black with bitterness
linger involuntarily on my lips?
Did the sun always shine so strong,
sparkling jewel-drops
against the gray metal hood?
Was I always able
to hear the spider
walk across it’s web?
Was the silk noose
‘round my neck
always this tight?
I know there was a time
when I lived
without your love
but I can’t remember it.


Belegon
Belegon
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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
WHY DIDNT HE TELL ME HE WAS MARRIED

his answer. I FORGOT. TK U MLJ LV NV

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
secure

Through good times or bad times ~ I remain secure within the boundaries of your sweet love.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

Bad memories are washed away but

A bad memory cannot be repaired...

gotwood49gotwood49almost 18 years ago
very good poem!

Nice imagery, Bel...I could almost see your furrowed brow as you wrote these lines, and sense your frustration. Nicely done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Belegon,

This is a good Bad Memory. I like the similes throughout—very fresh and imaginative.

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