- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Balance
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I would say my thoughts are these
Stack your words in opposing weights
Horizontal lever fulcrum placed
Offset or centered by design
Equalities grace within your mind
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- COMMENTS
Desejoover 10 years agoI like what you did with the first line.
The second I like a lot less - it's wordy and I don't think you need it (even visually).
Consider changing "your mind" in the final line to "the mind" only because it gives a more generic advice/scientific feel. I like this though.
tazz317over 10 years agothe two sitters will fall to their behindsl TK U MLJ LV NV
buttersover 10 years agobalance is everything, and so long as the poet weighs their words so will readers.
erectus123over 11 years agofluid dynamics are an integral part of sex, and mechanic also- nice to see your comments (5)
