- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Beach Villanelle
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Click heretalking long and lean my beauty queen
dressed up in colors that soothe this bloke
aquamarine, you know what I mean?
laid out low a site to be seen
pale blonde beaches the crashing waves choke
talking long and lean my beauty queen
life is anew with all senses keen
wash in her hues wade in for a soak
aquamarine, you know what I mean?
view is the same but not the routine
drink it all in no words to be spoke
talking long and lean my beauty queen
I'm up all night to prolong the scene
watching the sun birth bright as a yoke
aquamarine, you know what I mean?
have a longneck pick amber or green
I've just gotten started on Ocracoke
talking long and lean my beauty queen
aquamarine, you know what I mean?
- COMMENTS
duddle146about 17 years agoSpending time at the beach and writing about it ~ not the worst way to go.
LeBrozover 17 years agoThe form, the scene, spot on.
Form's done so well that the scene flows seamlessly, strengthening both.
doormouseover 19 years agoYou worked this really well. I've done a couple myself using repetition, and loved the rhythm of yours.
Great job. ;-)
Maria2394over 19 years agoyou just make me wanna jump in the car and head for the coast, thank you, this is a wonderful. bouyant diversion ;)
