- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Beauty Untold
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Click hereBeauty Untold is the girl I see
My Love for her, like the Raging Sea
Her Eyes, they shine like the Moon at Night
Fair Skin she has, such a Heavenly Sight
Her Movement so Swift, so full of Grace
Such Beauty in which Time has no place
So Vast a Love in me takes hold
For she is the Beauty, the Beauty Untold...
- COMMENTS
Raakashanabout 13 years agoAuthorOk thanks for clarifying... and i agree it is hard to be original sometimes. Thats kinda why I was nervous about actually publishing my stuff... I was afraid of people thinking I was being unoriginal with my writing.
vrosej10about 13 years agoHe's suggesting that there are too many other too similar poems. It's a common problem with love poetry. It is hard to be original.
Raakashanabout 13 years agoAuthorare you saying its been written before? I wrote this off the top of my head a month ago to try and get a girls attention... if someone already wrote it im sorry and ill give them their credit
GuiltyPleasureabout 13 years ago...with previous comment but keep reading others poetry and write your own.
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