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Click hereSummer awoke slowly,
On a bed of clover,
A dream-laden night,
The Moon, her lover;
Summer, barefoot beauty,
Wiggled her toes,
Watched the airy bestiary –
Distracted, reposed.
Maria's onto something there ~ clean out all that punctuation. This is one case where it is not needed in such a light, airy, breezy piece.
I find weakness in only the third and fourth lines (and I would rethink the punctuation). <?(((><
much too good to be laden with so many nasty little commas and the like!! take them out and see how much better it flows :)