- Erotic Poetry
- Before girl was myself You made me,
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Click hereBefore girl was myself You made me, me
With love and patience, discipline and tears,
Then bit by bit stepped back to set girl free,
Allowing girl to sail upon her sea,
Though well within the headlands of Your fears.
Before girl was myself you made me, me
With dreams enough of what girl was to be
And hopes that would be sculpted by the years,
Then bit by bit stepped back to set girl free,
keeping Your powers gradually
To let me shape myself among my peers.
Before girl was myself You made me, me,
And being good and wise, You gracefully
As dancers when the last sweet cadence nears
Bit by bit stepped back to set girl free.
For love inspires learning naturally:
The mind assents to what the heart reveres.
And so it was through love You made me, me
By slowly stepping back to set me free.
thank You Master
By: Salems_raven
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoI find that we are similar you and I I'm here to teach you more so come and let me.<grin>
Maria2394almost 18 years agoone of the better Master/girl poems I have read. YOu got your poeit across without being all squishy. One thing I dont care for is the caps to designate Y/y. I have never known a real Dom who insisted on those, maybe its just your deferrence to him. still, good work, could use some punctuation in spots, but I see why you didnt, it might have cost you with some other readers though. keep writing,
maria
