Before You Wake

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Belegon
Belegon
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the sunlight dances
its way through the clouds outside
and shades within
to find my eyelids and caress them open
and the first thing I see is you
quiet and still
dark hair against the pillow
a half smile on your face
a remnant
of some pleasant dream
perhaps of me
I reach over
and run my fingers
across the softness of your cheek
and enjoy the response
as you move into the touch
and snuggle into me
soon you will awaken
and your thoughts may be of children
of chores needed doing
of trips and directions
of work and worry
but in this moment
you are all mine.

Belegon
Belegon
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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
TO LIVE FOR A MOMENT

upon waking and reaching for more. TK U MLJ LV NV

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
intimate

That private intimate time ~ just before the woman you love wakes up ~ and gives you that first Good Morning kiss.

average ginaaverage ginaabout 18 years ago
Well, dammit...

All of the words that describe this poem have been taken! This is a lovely moment of perfect serenity. I like the perception that the two people have been together for a long time: his presuming her thoughts as if to feel what she feels and thinks. It reads like hot chocolate, warm and creamy.

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
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A precious moment, preciously described.

ty, bd

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