Begging for Danger

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The killing glances
of torture made sacred
surround my heart,
press down on my lungs,
and spill out my blood.
Fingertip knives scar,
but all I feel
is satin soft skin.
Lips and tongue,
featherlight flutters,
while ivory razors
sink deep.
Lust lets you press,
slide and shudder
your athame deep,
while all I feel
is the cock rhythm
in wet, willing, warmth,
while my body curls
in waves of ecstasy.

Every "little death"
leaves dissatisfaction,
to push closer still
to the thin barrier
and beg for the danger.
More biting kisses,
bruising touches,
suffocating glances,
until my body slices
the mortal veil
in one, final orgasm.

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TathagataTathagataabout 20 years ago
Always in

the back of our heads....

Would it be worth it??

I think so

; )

Powerful words and images

you keep getting better and better

thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Powerful.

Athame baffles me too, I have to admit, but this is a vivid piece of writing and has made me want more from a writer new to me.

YDDYDDabout 20 years ago
athame

Rough sex or bloody ritual?

At least I learned a new word

among the cutting climaxes

Enough similar sounds to keep

the blood and words flowing.

Toward A WordToward A Wordabout 20 years ago
vivid dream images

the evocative images compel the reader to savor this one - very well done

AngelineAngelineabout 20 years ago
Well Written!

Lots of good, vivid imagery here, and a great statement about the need to press ever closer. :)

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