- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Beginning Again
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Click hereThe beginning:
a start of a love anew;
commencement of a relationship,
time of togetherness.
The void:
a period of a lonely heart;
enchantment of a friend,
time of confusion.
The love:
a flame of a different light;
contentment of a sort,
time of togetherness.
The end:
a death of a loving heart;
confinement of a feeling,
time of confusion.
The beginning:
a kindling of an old flame;
continuation of a relationship,
time of love.
- COMMENTS
tazz317almost 12 years agoable to burn and let the phoenix ascend. TK U MLJ LV NV
duddle146about 17 years agoThis poem shows such great promise ~ if only the running together of the lines could have been avoided.
LeBrozover 17 years agoWell done and let me just second the Wicked lady's suggestion of breaking this into stanzas (or strophes). Beside making the flow and reading easier, it has a certain aesthetic appeal.
jthserraabout 20 years agoyou have done something interesting here, the cycle. Well done.
jim :)
WickedEveabout 20 years agoThis is rather interesting the way you start each section with the beginning, void, love, end, beginning. The only suggestion that I'd make would be to separate each section into a stanza.
