- Erotic Poetry
- Below Me - NLP
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The sun shines brightly above my mind
Thoughts of you float salaciously below me
Without a doubt knowing you want to please
Dropping instantly and graciously upon your knees
Lascivious thoughts of you drift below me
Placing all my affection tenderly above you
Cradling your head fondly within my hands
Caressing your soft sensuous flowing strands
My mind runs rampant with pure carnal thoughts
Your naked body beckoning my salacious cure
Your omnipotent mister’s healing touches fueling
Below me your submissions beg for my ruling
Below me your mouth opens with your mind
Eyes wide with comprehension’s wry smile
Suckling upon the bone of longing’s pacification
Extending the pleasure without any abbreviation
The exchange of power magnified with synergies
Ying and Yang flowing with the electricity of lust
Beautifully framed with unconditional debauchery
With the perfection of your pleasures below me
An Original Composition by:
Quivering Quill
A Scribbles & Doodles Creation
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- COMMENTS
twelveooneabout 11 years agohow many specific instances do you want?
Beautifully framed with unconditional debauchery
is just so much run on crockery
(sorry if it did not rhyme, but what are doing with it?)
abstract,abstract, preposition, abstract, abstract
somehow a bone is involved
4ed QQ
Quivering_Quillabout 11 years agoAuthorI appreciate you taking the time to leave a quick comment...QQ
erectus123about 11 years agoI might suggest try not to repeat words i.e. salacious; should mister be master?;
"Below me your mouth opens with your mind" is a nice line. constant up/ down
movement in poem is well done and grammar good
HarryHillabout 11 years agothen read it and found I was correct
