Bent

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I folded him ... bent
almost in two. Clinched
finger sheets, gasping.
Moans of guttural delight.

Smacks sinfully sleek.
Tweaks to his meaty
meat. Slammed headboard
drops mid air. Ask me ... if
I care.

Romped and rode,
pumped till I came.
Now Baby ... Do
tha same ...

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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
1ST CUM 1ST SERVED

now its your turn again TK U MLJ LV NV

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
Stunned

People who shout 'idiot' at others are invariably and unconsciously talking about themselves. My Erotic Tale does know the difference between bear and bare. He also has a sense of humor, something the pompous ranter apparently is totally unfamiliar with. He likes to play with words not use them as tools for torture.

Meanwhile back at the ranch, RF another hot poem. A woman who makes love like that would have men lined up around the block, waiting their turn to get bent.

4degrees4degreesover 18 years ago
daa

-yum.

that's daayum.

i love this.

for multuiple reasons.

kick ass write fairy girl

more pls.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
WHAT AN IDIOT!

"writes of passion are for the moment, and I see this moment <grin> don't re write it and try to figure out what others want but do what you feel is best and enjoy your next poem, rarely once a poem is submitted will any one re write it"

GOD, what an idiotic comment!

"<geez> yet some will waste breath say so, I enjoyed your poem RF and grin and bare the grammar police and their sniffin guard dogs,...got mace? <grin> got a great poem and I enjoyed it the way it is.,..thanks"

You don't even know the difference between "bare" and "bear"... Worse still, you don't even care. :(

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
perfect

writes of passion are for the moment, and I see this moment <grin> don't re write it and try to figure out what others want but do what you feel is best and enjoy your next poem, rarely once a poem is submitted will any one re write it <geez> yet some will waste breath say so, I enjoyed your poem RF and grin and bare the grammar police and their sniffin guard dogs,...got mace? <grin> got a great poem and I enjoyed it the way it is.,..thanks

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