- Erotic Poetry
- Best Christmas Ever
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Click hereT’was the night before Christmas,
I said with a tear,
“I’ve no money for
gifts for my boyfriend this year!”
I cried a long time about
The things I can’t get,
Then I finally came
Up with the best present yet.
I’ve found the best present to
Leave under the tree…
Me in nothing but ribbons,
What better to see!
I’m expecting him home soon,
Need time to prepare.
Apply perfume, do makeup,
And play with my hair
Now came time for the ribbons,
I cannot be shy.
He’ll slowly untie me and
I’ll smile and sigh.
I stared into the mirror
And liked what I saw.
My outfit was perfect and
My look had no flaw.
I lit up some candles and
Poured both us some wine.
Too bad that this sweet juice is
No sweeter than mine!
I hear the door open, I
Must highlight my chest.
I lay out on a blanket,
Whipped cream on my breast.
He walks into the bedroom,
Bags fall to the floor.
He quickly rushed over, through
My ribbons he tore.
He screamed out in pleasure as
I reached for his belt.
At this moment he’s harder
Than I’ve ever felt!
I rip off his clothing and
He lets out a moan.
I eagerly fondle his
Big hardening bone.
He slowly caresses my
Soft quivering thighs.
I moan and get wetter with
Each method he tries.
His tongue is exploring my
Hot pulsating mound.
The silence is tainted by
Lust’s echoing sound.
I can take it no longer…
So hard to be coy.
He fingers my wetness, I
Gasp, “Fuck me big boy!”
He breaks through my tightness, I’m
So wet that I drip.
He moans as I tighten my
Hot moistened pink lips.
Our passions ignited, for
True pleasure I strive…
Try the best new positions
My mind can derive.
I scream out as he’s pounding,
“Go hard and go fast!”
For the first time in hist’ry,
I shall not cum last!
He’s pounding me harder with
My ass in the air.
I wildly climax as
He pulls on my hair.
I’m feeling him climax and
Inject his sweet juice.
This pleasureful ending that
Love’s touch can induce.
In the darkness we cuddle,
I lay in his arms.
For so long he’s seduced me
With his endless charms.
I feel that my present was
Rather quite clever,
And this truly has been the
Best Christmas ever!
- COMMENTS
tazz317over 11 years agobut when both do both. gifts accepted, TK U MLJ LV NV
Christina O. Leighover 19 years agoThis was really wild. While I did enjoy it, I think the flow needs to be worked on. I also think you could have summed this up a little shorter. But you did keep my interest, for sure :-)
Example:
Try to keep the same syllable count in each line for each stanza as the one before.
Such as
1st stanza-
7
5
7
5
2nd- same
Hope this helps:)
No harm meant.
Christina
My Erotic Tailover 19 years agoThis Poem was mentioned in the "New Poem Review" thread~
skip.69over 19 years agoOh, if only I could find a present like that under my tree - my own tree would grow instantly!
postobitumover 19 years agovery naughty! If I ever tried that it would be my mother walking in with the kids or some other traumatic scenario. :)
