- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Better Left Unspoken
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Click hereI stood facing the wind listening1
searching for echoes
striving to hear
the lost laughter
of mistaken luncheons
and forbidden phone calls
running my fingers
through the undertones
of careful conversation
where everything is said
I never said
I'm not afraid of pain
I just don't fear it
as much as apathy
So now I will try
to keep things unvoiced
to hide a half
of my dreaming whole
better to agonize
over not expressing
then for you to leave
I'll keep desires secret
even from you
say words under my breath
into the wind
that invisibly whispers
through your hair
and then you are mine in victorious feeling2
1in On The Back Of A '57 Indian, by jd4george ©2004
2in "Continuous Feeling", by Champagne1982©2004
- COMMENTS
LeBrozabout 17 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,500 poems.
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duddle146about 17 years agoThis poem is filled with wonderful visual images and builds to completion.
duddle146over 17 years agoPreferring the road less traveled more afraid of apathy than pain. Beautifully expressive! Simple and exquisite!
Below my favorite lines...
I never said
I'm not afraid of pain
I just don't fear it
as much as apathy
LeBrozover 17 years agoSubtle word craftmanship
Well woven phrses around two lines
Borrowed from two of Lit's own.
WickedEveover 19 years agorunning my fingers
through the undertones
of careful conversation
Love this!
