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beware oo

bySenna Jawa©

Remark:  oo  is the mathematical symbol of infinity.






        i  16
        didn't know why
        she  16  and i  16  were in that boat  8

        i dived into cold Baltic  1,000,000.

        she  16  was not my woman
        the boat  8  like a released dog  shot to my friend  17
        sunning on sand  1,000,000

        medusas  1  and i  16  were floating on the waves  0
        the orange houses  50
        were glued to the white ribbon of the beach  1000
        like post stamps on a green envelope

        she  16  came back

        the blonde sun  16
        filled the dark water  16
        with an ocean of desire  0

        why  16  i asked
        because
        she  16  answered
        he  17  ordered so
        and you  16  were so cold  0

        beware of woman's  oo  pity






wlodzimierz holsztynski ©
       1982-88

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