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Click hereTime has passed,
Unto the next.
With a broken heart,
A broken wing.
That was left to be mend.
She then came,
Picking up pieces.
Of a tired life,
Worn and drawn.
Almost beyond repair.
Life was hard before.
A broken marriage,
A broken home.
With a stone,
For a heart.
Left bruised and abuse,
The past had left its mark.
Bitter and cold.
Time has made the perfect,
Ice Queen.
She then came,
Melting away the ice.
Making the heart beat,
Once again in the dark.
With a warm light up ahead.
Showing the way,
To a new life.
A new start.
Beyond,
The Pain.
with the morrow begins a new lite. TK U MLJ LV NV
A potent mix
Of life's cruel tricks;
Agree with W.E. - a judicious add-on
Of a few details could give this piece
Powerful impact.
but I'd really love to know more. I want to feel what you're saying. All I know is that there was a broken marriage, broken home and abuse. It's awful and it's sad. It does happen often and it happens everywhere. But make this poem more personal. Give me the story behind the broken marriage and abuse. Tell me about the person, about her personal situation. Details will only strengthen your work.