- Erotic Poetry
- Big Bad Wolf
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Click hereYou drip into my thoughts like a slip of the tongue and blushing of parted lips; ravenous.
Your indulgence of my masochistic inquires is shamelessly scandalous,
Akin to a laceration of lace and a bursting of buttons, unraveling the threads of my modesty.
The consequences stripping me of my delicacy exposing the betrayal of my anatomy.
Brutality and savagery quicken my submission and the remnants of my restraint will succumb; a hunger.
Dive into the warmth of my energy, the color of my heart, the wavelength of my soul; exploit.
Your devilish grin growing, dilated pupils following my form taking sadistic pleasure in my resistance to a futile fight.
Wide eyes watch your teeth sink into the purity of my flesh, porcelain complexion now stained with crimson red; capitulation to a carnal sentiment; surrender.
- COMMENTS
todski28about 10 years agofor that little piece of thought, and a sentiment I agree with.
greenmountaineerabout 10 years agoI agree with tod; very seductive. I thought your skillful use of punctuation set a good rhthym.
The line that begins "Your indulgence of.." I didn't think added anything, and it felt like it was there just to have a rhyme. In fact, I think this good poem would have been a better poem without it.
Nicely done. I enjoyed reading it and reciting it.
todski28about 10 years agoWriting assonance, alliteration hard rhyme
Coupled with pleading urgency and a well written femininity,
Brutality and savagery quicken my submission and the remnants of my restraint will succumb; a hunger.
This is like sex for my mouth when spoken aloud, you rock
