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Being under the Big Bowl of sky
counting stars, losing count
The dipper seemed not so big
The little scoop was so bright
we waved our arms out to hug it
collecting
moth wing dust
and residue of star dust
too
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tazz317almost 12 years agoAN INVERTED BOWL IS OVER
all as a giant screen of kalediscopes TK U MLJ LV NV
duddle146about 17 years agoCounting
Was there ever a child who hasn't tried counting the stars in the sky at night.
LeBrozover 17 years ago~~
One of those good ones from Lit's inner vault
Word usage taut
Image vibrant
Catch the image on your cell phone.
