- Erotic Poetry
- Big Kel
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Oh my goodness
Kelly!
I said
"You're so
pretty!"
She looked
at me as I
caressed her
hair
and she said
"You really
think so?"
Yes, I said
She laid
her head on
my breast
I fell asleep
and woke
up to her
sucking me
I felt gentle
licks on my
nipple
through my
nightie
they started
tender
I looked
and gently
touched her
shoulder
She jumped
in surprise
Her mouth open
in halted explanation
it's okay I said
and touched
the top
of her head
she asked me
if I was mad
at
her
I said no
baby
she came up
and kissed me
on my lips
stroking my
pussy til
I came
she then took
the juices
and rubbed
it on my
exposed
breast and suckled
I told her to stop
trying to pull
her head away with
both hands but she
wouldn't
and kept sucking
on both breasts til
I came
I was drained she
came up to me
looked me in
my eyes
kissed me on
the cheek
and said
I love you
I just want
to please you
Please
let me please you
she went to
the foot of the bed
and placed my
big toe in her mouth...
- COMMENTS
ch3mical_r3nt_boyover 8 years agoNot sure what the others meant when they said this wasn't a poem, this is more honest and feels more biographical than 90% of the poems I read here. Please don't stop writing, I love your style and the stories you have to tell.
HarryHillover 10 years agowhat a positive comment. no vote from me either. I liked the other one.
GuiltyPleasureover 10 years ago.....but arranging prose this way doesn't make a poem. It must have been an exciting encounter but none of that comes through. Next time try tapping into that feeling and help the reader to feel it too. Experiment, you have an interesting voice.
