Birth of a child

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So pure, so perfect, yet so helpless...
in a world of dominating captivation
Exposed to hope of much bemusement
Yet, so vulnerable to every
contamination flaw
spreading rapidly...

If only these perfect wings
could be preserved and well directed -
to create a shield for every gust
of beguiling lust
and receive its glory
after every storm

To let the voice of these wings
be listened to
not heard
So that for once
the flaw
of beguilement can be cured
And every wing...
Perfect...
or crooked...
could find the two pieces
between each storm

Until the crooked can no longer
dissimulate the perfect
and the perfection
will be what it is

To let freedom dominate
bemused captivation
An all shall fly
in a righteous band -
peacefully
displaying
harmony

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
THE HELPLESS INFANT

only wanting sustenance and warmth, TK U MLJ LV NV

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
beginnings

depicting the helplessness of a new born child.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Birth

Magical experience well written

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
~~

Saw saldne's recommendation

On the New Poem's Review;

Saved you to the end ~

A wait rewarded

And let me add

Welcome to Lit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
!

To let freedom dominate

bemused captivation

An all shall fly

in a righteous band -

peacefully

displaying

harmony

It was a tad long, but well worth the read. The ending lines were fab! Thanks for sharing and keep writing! :)

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