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Click hereA bitch is one who will not fuck
A whore will spread her legs for all
So bitch is mine and mine's the luck
A bitch is one who will not fuck!
Am I too nice? Am I a schmuck?
If whores I would invite to call
Abitchis one who will not fuck?
A whore will spread her legs! For all!
at least in my opinion. The sense of the poem wanders a bit, but you've executed the form pretty darn well, I think. There's some variation in the form of the repeated lines (which is good), and your meter is, 'far as I can tell, dead on. Well done.