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Click hereI wanna bite,
sink my teeth in,
deep. Run my wet
tongue, over your
entire body.
Bend your body,
like a pretzel,
given to me,
for my pleasures
of pain ... love.
Nip that tiny,
sensitive spot,
behind your knees.
Slow slide tongue,
guiding its way up,
to shaved, engorged
cock.
Slowly flick, lick
your rim. Sloppy wet
kisses, till you beg,
for more.
I shall not stop,
till I have tasted,
your whole body.
Beware, the time
has come, for me
to taste, your cum ~
Pretty amazing response to your very hot poem. Seems you've touched some very sensitive spot in some people with some rather twisted issues. Whatever. Your poem rocks.
lol, BD
meaty bits
of prosey
fuckwords
make salivary glands
flow like a
wide open faucet
oh hell yes.
RF I understand the passion you are trying to hit here with the poem. It has potential and I can feel heat smoldering beneath the words. I am sorry I was not around to help you on one of the FLUFFY useless writers threads that I share on. It does need work and I think you have the emotional makings of a hot erotic poem here. I am going to take it to Chasin Chickens and play with it for you if you do not mind. I hope to let all know that we are serious there just like to laugh also. Art and I IM alot when we work on poems and I would gladly do that with you if you like. Let me know
du~
another grammar police, lauren in disguise? Sounds like her, dont fret the nazi comments, obviously this person has a deep hurt or pain and lost soul and needs something to soothe the soul, like hatred for those that write well and recieve praise? I enjoy your poems RF and so do others, seems some don't like the recognition you have recieved.
Your poem was HOT, HEHEHE Erotic which is what this site is geared for and you do it very well <grin> please continue