Bittersweet

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lindiana
lindiana
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Bittersweet
Holding on
To something gone

Harmony
Built with tones
Sometimes sharp

Crystalline
Shards of ice
Drawing blood

Crimson heat
Pooling cooling
On frozen marble

Eternity
Captured in one
Heartless moment

Forever gone


lindiana
lindiana
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duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Shades...

The many moods and shapes of ~ bittersweet.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
An excellent piece...

well done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Contrasts

I loved the opposing images suggesting bitterweet such as the use of the word harmony in conjunction with the word sharp.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 18 years ago
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My first impulse was to think it'd be better as,

"To something long gone,"

But then I finished reading it and realized

With "forever gone" at the end,

The "long" is not needed.

It's good just the way it is!

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
bittersweet

I enjoyed the spiral descent of words that lead to a nice visual from this poem.

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