- Erotic Poetry
- bj song
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Click heremy dick is as hard as a fucking rock
will someone suck my goddamn cock
if – u leave- my balls blue
u don’t wanna know what ill do
ill smoke a girl down to hear that sloppy sound
up and down lick It all around
if I skeet, in ur eye
don’t get mad don’t you cry
I know it stings
I know it hurts
Just think thank god it didn’t get on ur shirt
My jizz is as warm as a fleece
But to feel it, u gotta suck my dick like a piece
THAT’S THE END OF BLOW JOB SONG
NOW I GOTTA GO QUICK TO HIT A BONG
- COMMENTS
tazz317over 11 years agocomplete the whole task. TK U MLJ LV NV
notnamerabout 16 years agoTone alone is worth 50% on this short piece
----- It has subtle-variational-meanings: to whit: this wit:
1 "if – u leave- my balls blue u"
SHOWING BALLY BLOW BACK
----- 2 "u don’t wanna know what ill do ill smoke a girl"
THE MISSED-SPELLING WORKS AS BOTH "I'LL" AND "ILL"
----- However, though the tone does develop itself into something conclusive, it's not an interesting piece -
----- SO 50% FOR TONE - 25% FOR EFFORT - YIELDS 75%
