Black Eyes

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“Black Eyes”


Floating to the power line,
and dancing into balance.
Head twitching from side to side,
looking over sentience.
Making the watch of irony,
their personal mission happenstance.
The spirit guide, avenger and warning,
lacking vocal eloquence.
The sky aloft wields in all his heart,
proud majestic eminence.
But to humanity, the grounded souls.
These black-winged Corvid’s puissance.

The Mystery Valiant
6-18-2006

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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
IN DAYS OF YORE

there were no power lines....only grids. TK U MLJ LV NV

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,500 poems.

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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And from the simple folk

A less poetic observation,

"Damn noisy crows."

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
a touch of

Walken...as I pondered these words on the crow thread..the images that were created like that sinister lift on an eyebrow...ty for sharing ....blue

Maria2394Maria2394almost 18 years ago
:)

didnt I see this on a crow poems thread?

enjoyed your observations

:)

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