Blank Betty

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it's a hard life, this
   dry fingers  – just to avoid another unwanted (wanted?) (unwanted?) pregnacy, you understand –
      insert her mortal
         coil
she struts
   yes, struts
      toward the door of her
         gaff

her cunt (heart?) no longer yearns for love
   not like the old days
      before gail came into anno domini
          bee gee
lie here, under the beached whale
   a man she does not know
      a man who must (must?) (should?) must have
         another life

he is heavy
   fat
      olid
         old (no it wasn't a spelling mistake)
i do it for my daughter
   is all
      i do it for her sake
         gail

tomorrow i will mow the lawn instead
   i can see pigeons fucking in the garden now
      as he leaves his money
         on the bed
tomorrow i will not work
   i will
      not work
         i will

blank betty
   bam-a-lam
      oh, blank betty
         bam
oh, blank betty
   blank (blank?) betty
      bam
         a-lam

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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
DOES BLANK BETTY

have instincts for others or whom. TK U MLJ LV NV

ThatRetroHorrorThatRetroHorrorover 14 years ago
Much Better...

After reading that last bit you wrote, I decided that I'd look through here and see what else you had to offer--see if it might've been the fact that it was 'older' work or sommot.

I must say that your poetry is astounding.

Beautiful. Simply beautiful.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
damn

evelyn_carroll

that is a name I will remember and look for.

thank you for something new with which to end my day.

hopes for more,

annaswirls etc

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
Wham bam...

thank you mam, for this delightful read.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
bam a lam

oh betty is a girl friday,

hell I lost mine <grin>

been banking on miss tuesday <smile>

on a serious note the realism was real

and the humor was funny ~~

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