Bleeding Heart

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Have you ever seen a Bleeding Heart?
Not a beating heart that pounds in our chest
I speak of the plant

This pleasant day found me outside in the sun
Looking at a plant that reminded me much of my sex

So pink and perfect heart-shaped
With a protruding stamen that echoed my own clitoris

I was watching a fat, fuzzy bumble bee
As he dances from one flower to another
Tickling each stamen delightfully

Tenderly gathering the pollen with his skilled legs
Making my own sex grow hot and wet

Wishing for a lover to stroke me with such tenderness
Until my nectar flows from my depths for him

And we two can 'pollinate' together as one

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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
THERE IS COMPARASION

twixt flora and sex, TK U MLJ LV NV

deedeelaycedeedeelaycealmost 16 years agoAuthor
Reply To Anonymous in Canada...

The sexes are not skewed. The plant is female and the bee is male. I hope this clears up any confusion for any future readers. Thank you, deedeelayce

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Maybe you could make it more gender bending?

I liked a lot of the imagery, but I wish you'd do something to acknowledge you're skewing the sexes. (The flower stamen is the male, the bee who pollinates is female).