- Erotic Poetry
- Bloodbound
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With my blood I bound you to me
to my Body, to my Soul
I will make you mine
to be my eternal bride
red blood runs down upon my white skin
come little one, taste me, enjoy me
go with me to another world
where rules are no more
and pleasure to be sure
Drink, I know you want this
deep inside I feel you’re burning desire
enjoy the fresh taste of my hot blood
drink me
taste me
feel me
let me run through you’re veins
I know I feel it too
the power, the pleasure, the thrill
Drink, theres more litte one, much more
all just for you, for you alone
my mirror
my female self
I made you just for me
so that you serve only me
in exchange I give you extatic pleasure
and sinful pain
You’re sweet red lips are wide open
hoping, wanting, crying
I feel you’re young blood burning
And screaming for more
then come my love
let me enjoy you’re blood too
and complete our bound
so red innocent blood
oh.. my beloved
you taste so sweet, so passioned, so wild
like me
Come now precious
let’s melt together
let’s combine our wounds
where still red blood flows
fell me deep inside you
enjoy my blood, my tongue
enjoy my scent, my white love
enjoy me over and over again
I want that you’re completely addicted to me
So that you never run away from me
Our young Blood runs now through each others veins
You’re Body is now completly devoted to mine
You’re serving Soul bows to my will
I have you at last under control
From the beginning of time
I have chosen you my Bride
from the womb I took you with me
to be my lover, to be my faithful wife
you’re forever mine
my bevoled sister bride
- COMMENTS
Safe_Betover 15 years agoI think that this is a promising first piece. A little wordy, but all in all nicely done. What really hurt the effectiveness of the piece were the two spelling errors. "ecstatic" and "beloved". LOL Don't feel bad, I've missed spelling errors in stuff that I have read hundreds of times. You might want to consider having somebody proof read prior to submittal. The Poetry Feedback and Discussion Forum might be a good place for you to visit. It has / is helping me tremendously. Here's the link: http://forum.literotica.com/forumdisplay.php?f=25
