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Click hereyou pose under
these cherry trees, water
tranquil by your feet
i imagine your hair up,
flowered kimono,
and shuttering theshōji
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todski28about 10 years agothe sonics in this are
As beautiful as the scene depicted, smooth flow
and amazing finish.
Neonuroticabout 10 years agoSpare but finishes big
I like this very much. One of the most erotic sounds I've ever heard was the sound of someone removing a silk kimono.
oneiriaabout 10 years agoVery nice.
Your poem induces a state of tranquility. Every word is perfect. I have always been partial to short poems and Japanese forms.
