- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Blossom of Spring
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Click hereBlossom of Spring
Darling child, so little, yet so bright.
Eleven years ago you came into my life.
So small and delicate, such a bright hope.
So many dreams are instilled in you,
Wanting and hoping for such a future in you.
Seeing so many changes day by day,
Nothing stays the same, come what may.
Once you were so small, so dependent on me.
Look at you now, almost a woman I see.
Growing so fast, so quick, changing all the time.
I look at you and see my precious child.
I look again and see this woman on the verge of being her own.
So worried about your future,
My hopes and dreams are there for you.
Wanting the best for you,
Wanting the world for you,
Thinking of all you can and will be.
My darling child please realize, I only want the best for you.
You were so wanted,
Planning was there, but you came on your own time.
Daughter with all my love for you,
I will want to see the wondrous woman you will become.
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 17 years agoAdmirable expressions
Of a mother's love for her daughter;
Seems a bit bogged down when
These feelings want to soar.
YDDalmost 20 years agoA mother's heartfelt note to her daughter.
It makes me wonder why it would be posted on an adult content site.
It seems out of place here in its innocence.
Constructurally this poem might benefit by some fresher phrases.
The emotional theme is common.
The words don't have to be trite.
Keep writing
