Blue Diamonds

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Silence drenched the midnight covered sea,
The drift of wave splashing over bodies;
Bodies writhing in tumultuous ecstasy:
Hidden by the passing waters;
Their lovers storm; Raged.

She lay beneath him,
Snow white skin, Cradling him;
As he parted shapely thighs;
Shell pink lips;
Parted, and she breathed deeply;
Lost in his silent pleas;

He rose above her;
Body quivering with need;
A crest of waves;
Showering their bodies,
Recently met;
With a gentle mist..

Eyes met,
Darkened with passion;
Bodies collided;
They were one..
For this moment;
A body forever changed,
At a lovers:
Meeting..

Eyes rose to his,
A never-ending tide of blue;
Lashes lift;
Sparkles of ocean spray,
Dotting their brilliant hue;

"Love me.." was her soft whisper;
The line of pleading; growing ever thin;
And he did, as her voice;
Soothed a path;
Along his headed skin,

Together they surrender;
To the love bore in their heart;
Souls melding;
Minds blending;
They were lost to everything;

The waves crashed,
Sending a shower of blue;
Blue diamonds making;
A path along the sky..

For that moment;
That splash of blue;
The world seemed to fade away;
And neither thought of just 'you'.

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
BLUE ON BLUE

with shimmer and silver in the glow. TK U MLJ LV NV

fawniefawniealmost 20 years ago
i thought..

it was lovely

it flowed so well i didn't even notice the rhyme at 1st

very nice!

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
I love your work

The first stanza of this is fabulous!

Here:

Soothed a path;

Along his headed skin,

Do you mean heated skin? Editing does a looooong way!

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