Blue Feeling

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it was like she never left
like he never righted

everything was tipping
the orbit was knocked
askew and disjointed

she heard his talk and that
woman's accent
across the river tall talking

he had read her poems
her passions
that mean nothing
because electric
light as air
means dissolving

he is more physical,
she is sentenced to find
the hole
she deposits thoughts
into

he only puts more spunk,
he smiles with each donation,
she smiles at his emptiness

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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
ONE SHOULD COMPARTMENTALIZE

thoughts and clothing. TK U MLJ LV NV

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

Here's another donation

From Lit's treasured vault

As she values his resulting emptiness;

Oh so draining.

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