Blue Revelations 2

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Part 1 of the 4 part series

Updated 03/17/2021
Created 08/12/2005
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bluerains
bluerains
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corporal glance
a sly view
yet tangible
feeling physicality
unraveling savage
cravings on demand
charms are without
morals or regret
without honor
yet raw passion
its emotive drive
casting contradictions
of this dilemma
as I follow pied piper's
rivers of corruption
and pour this divine cup into
a scorched cauldron
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5 Comments
tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
AND FOR ALL THOSE EXERTIONS

what will the benefits be, TK U MLJ LV NV

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
blue

blew a trumpete and revolations <grin> I always enjoy your writes...

sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
DAYUM!!!!!!!!

'and i leave traces of yet, another cup of regret .. follow me too... another trace of the blu.. very well written , DAYUM !! again ! ...... sweetGApeaches

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Passionate ~!!

yet raw passion

its emotive drive

casting contradictions

of this dilemma

as I follow pied piper's

rivers of corruption

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My fav. lines.

A deep and sorrowful look

into passion. Love the dark weave

you have sown into this cryptic poem.

Sadness comes poring out. Love this one too.

CuriouswifeCuriouswifeover 18 years ago
I really liked this

and read it several time, each time taking something different away from it. Thanks.

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