Blues

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It is a minute that feels like an hour
When loneliness descends and drapes her cloudy veil.
Glances of intimate strangers,
Who moments ago were friends,
Hurt.

A crystal teardrop falls to trace a meaningful path
Hinting at raging sadness bound and confined within.
Smiles of joyful crowds,
Roam lost in blind silence,
Pain.

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BlackWolf65BlackWolf65over 16 years ago
Wow

This is very evocative. It's been some time since I've read anything off the boards in Lit. I'm glad I started here.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Hurt and pain

The anthem of the blues.

oregon_galoregon_galalmost 18 years ago
ouch...

"A crystal teardrop falls to trace a meaningful path

Hinting at raging sadness bound and confined within."

like a daggar, this line hurts. thank you for the read, it stabbed at me.

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