tagNon-Erotic PoetryBlushing Lucy

Blushing Lucy


Her petals were barely open, just enough
to catch a tantalizing glimpse
of palest pink, wherein a dewdrop
of moisture glistened in the awakening dawn.
As I gazed in transfixed wonder
she slowly opened when I lowered
my face to breathe her sweet perfume
delicate in her newness, before joy of life
sent her tumbling over the trellis.
Oh Blushing Lucy the sweetest Rose of all.

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