byClayton Long©


I slink back in my room
but I know it’s too soon
and catch the whiff of the fume
Of my earlier doom.

She’s left a note on the doona
“That’s life” is her tune
and my head just goes BOOM.
And I cry, and I cry, and I cry,
But for whom?


So sweet but with a dark side
She did so well to hide it
It was just like licking ice cream
With razor blades inside it.

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