Bound

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You roped me in
twined ties binding
my thoughts
You tied me up
firm knots twisting
my stomach
You unraveled me
frayed dreams splitting
my soul
You left some slack
tattered hope tugging
my heart

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AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
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Wonderful expressive thoughts

J.DoeJ.Doeover 18 years ago
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I like your metaphor, but your poem has too many cliches.

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Nice imagery

impactful;

works on more than one level;

well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
tight

nice visual and to the point. sandspike

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