- Erotic Poetry
- Boy Toy
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Click hereI need
a boy toy.
A man to suit
my needs.
I shall tailor him
like a penguin, nothing
but the best.
For a lick
a dive
a lil taste
of heaven.
Requirements :
A shaking shimmy
digging of tunnels
like a rabbit he must run.
A dolphin he must
swim. A frothy ocean
of cream
his dessert
I have in mind.
Please send resume
to 69-69
My place.
If you would be
so kind ...
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoI enjoyed reading this, my dear. Very sensual and bubbly but am confused by one thing. In the opening stanza, you've written:
'I need
a boy toy.
A man to suit
my needs.'
This sounded a little confusing since it implied you wanted two different things (rather than just the first thing)
Still, an enjoyable poem
My Erotic Trailalmost 18 years agoI hope your ready for a flood of e-MALES <grin I certainly enjoyed this poem (~_*) and I loved your clich' <grinin
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoSome strange, choppy line breaks. Try lengthening some of them. And try to avoid the old 69 cliche. :)
