Breakfast

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HarryHill
HarryHill
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Awake,
she stretched then searched with hand
for comforts dependable morning stand
but,all she found was empty bed.
She turned on side and raised head.

Gone,
who knew where? Nostrils sniffed the air.
Dragging panties on bare can
She went looking for her missing man.

At last,
in the kitchen wayward found,
naked at stove hair unbound.
Sneaking behind without a sound,
she began a stealthy reacharound.

Gadzooks! Your hands are cold.

HarryHill
HarryHill
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GToastGToastover 10 years ago
True lee horrible

a zero vote

for your

bad poet

tree.

Villanelles are for those with

Functioning brainst

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See? I can fuck up punctuation and spelling as well as you

Can and still

Be taken seriouslee...

kokshurkokshurover 11 years ago
gadzooks

great old word. I enjoyed this one. surprise ending. fun.

ArjayEiffArjayEiffover 11 years ago
Bard

it has a nice storytelling rhythm to it, timely in the run up to halloween. The gadzooks made me laugh

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
CHILLY WILL HANDS

strike while the stove is hot, TK U MLJ LV NV

DesejoDesejoover 11 years ago
Gadzooks?

Like the idea. Love that the dude has long hair, that was somewhat unexpected. Not so sure about dragging panties (sounds like a full diaper to me) . Gadzooks makes him sound like that weird space alien Gazoo that appeared in the Flintstones in the later years. Now I gotta find an episode to watch.