Breaking Up

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You know that I love you,
and yes,
we've known each other for a long time.

I don't like to share you.

But even if I have to
break you up into two cookies,
I'll make sure to get
more cream filling on my side.

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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A very fine amusing write. Here's a thought: take out the cookies and let the readers' imaginations go to town. Now think of all the cream-filled things that can be split in two ~ not just cookies but donuts and eclairs and other pastry delights.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 17 years ago
breaking up

I like the way this was played out only wish that there was more witty humor... sort of like 'lays potatoe chips' can't eat just one (~_~) nice 'short' write

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