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Breakthroughs, stars in the night skye
     Wake me in the starlight  
That soft gleam on a moonless night;
Those cool sands shifting underfoot;
Their footprints slowed and then erased
     wiped clean by the winds  
None walked here save the winds
     Whisper'd glances and smitten thoughts,
Come and lie down beside me
Those are the artefacts of my life
     Take them and fashion my epitaph
How could that be?
                           I am burnt,
     no markers for me.
Gaia cried and that will suffice:
those heaving's, those roilings,
those ripples across that sheened flesh
     Mine I said
                         or did she not hear?

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