- Erotic Poetry
- Breathe
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i have become You
my body aches to please You
if only i could breathe You
Master
i love you completely
my warm mouth is thirsty to taste You
my pussy is wet for Your touch
if only i could breathe You
Master
You are my reason
Your strong hand pulls me towards You
as i struggle just to breathe You
if only i could breathe You
Master
do You love me???
my lust is overwhelming for You
my heart is overflowing to You
if only i could breathe You
Master
my heart breaks now
forlorn, lonely, i need You
You are so far away from me
if only i could breathe You
- COMMENTS
Tathagataalmost 20 years agotribute to a Master.
I'm sure your new path will give you mush more to write about.
I look forward to reading it
Thank you
WickedEvealmost 20 years agoMany subs start out this way, as far as poetry goes. I'm sure your Master will be pleased. If your only desire is to please him by submitting this poem for all to see, for all to know your depths of submission, then you have accomplished that. If your desire is to write better poetry, then please visit the poetry board here at literotica. You will be welcomed with open arms, well, open threads or something. :)
YDDalmost 20 years agoAnother letter from a sub to a master.
A first one for this poetess.
Hopefully she will read submissions by others
and learn to grow her talent as she writes more.
