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Breathing Underwater

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patientlee
patientlee
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Sometimes I dream that
I can breathe underwater.
Tried it once. Just once.

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patientlee
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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Sometimes I dream...

I breathe underwater

I tried it once with that love first found

I awoke in terror because

I saw myself...

I saw myself that I was drowned

HoneyAdoredHoneyAdoredover 9 years ago
And you...

...Lived to tell the tale.

Made me smile and titter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Haiku!

First off, it's funny. Second of all, this reminds me of Haiku...except it makes a whole lot more sense! :-)

Sincerely, Payenbrant

JWrenJWrenover 9 years ago
One and only

Yes, some things you can only do once. So simple and subtle, I almost choked. Nice one!

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 9 years ago
nice illustration but

holdin' breath is easier than breathin' underwater ??!

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