- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Breathless
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I look up at the night sky
and think of Her
and the air rushes from my lungs
leaving me gasping
as if I have been launched
into the cold, dark vacuum of Space.
My vision blurs
and I see the stars above
dancing like merry fires
mocking me
for everyone knows
that fires cannot burn
where there is no air to breathe.
SimpleGifts, July 2006
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoI felt, in an almost physical way, what was written. Nicely done.
CeriseNoirealmost 17 years agoLove that leaves you breathless. You got the feeling across quite well.
