tagErotic Poetrybreathless



Like those 8 intimate seconds of orgasm,
You’ve filled my core with ecstasy, and intensity.
As I become undone, forgive me but,
You’ve taken my breath away

Like winter’s first snowflake onto the virgin earth,
Your southern kiss brings forth moisture
Bittersweet torture to my body, pleasure to my soul,
Your butterfly touches, drug inducing to my mind.

Like embracing a new day from dawn till dusk,
I hold onto you, feel you.
Drunken, by your intimate words,
You’ve taken my breath away.

Sat 6th Dec 08

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