Bright Reality

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And now I see
what before lie in darkness
All around me
Now shown in starkness

Yet I do not fear
But accept with open arms
new world made clear
through sleight of his charms

With new eyes
And my mind soaring free
I welcome the surprise
of this Bright Reality

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theognistheognisabout 11 years ago

A new world made clear through deception? A welcome surprise? Interesting.

lonelyhousewife32lonelyhousewife32about 11 years agoAuthor

I did mean "sleight" to imply deception.

theognistheognisabout 11 years ago
You're welcome

Although there's nothing incorrect about it, I was also wondering if 'sleight' was the word you really meant to use in the second stanza. Perhaps you meant to imply deception, but I'm thinking perhaps not.

lonelyhousewife32lonelyhousewife32about 11 years agoAuthor
Ah, yes...

I seem to always get that wrong. Thanks, Anon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Suggest:

"what before lay in darkness"