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Click hereAnd now I see
what before lie in darkness
All around me
Now shown in starkness
Yet I do not fear
But accept with open arms
new world made clear
through sleight of his charms
With new eyes
And my mind soaring free
I welcome the surprise
of this Bright Reality
A new world made clear through deception? A welcome surprise? Interesting.
Although there's nothing incorrect about it, I was also wondering if 'sleight' was the word you really meant to use in the second stanza. Perhaps you meant to imply deception, but I'm thinking perhaps not.