Bring On The Chicks

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BRING ON THE CHICKS

obsession of the "hot one"
is a valid reason to the musician.
all of those practice sessions,
so vitally important to the ear.
every day thinking of new licks;
the kind that makes them come
in huge, huge, huge droves.

music videos are a great indicator.

the ego is built up like it should be,
after all a musician is romantically
the entertainment god.

little by little - a small following
starts to take place without much notice.

the day arrives... much is expected
from all the years of jamming out.

there - amongst the crowd -
axe now in hand for the sound check.

this moment of life - a monumental high;
the melodies hit the summer air.

way back in the crowd, is another player,
and sees an unusual pattern
occurring right before his eyes.
muse is everything these days;
this was a feature act.
femme cats so horny, definitely
started to swarm the area -
hiked skirts - up like tails - pussy it was!!

the analysis shapes up as such:
always let the instrument in the band room
become a trail of attraction
for spectacular results -
that is play - piss guitar!!

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9 Comments
LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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And here the groupies play really hard.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
I'm here for.....

the party, it was fun to read. sand

twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 19 years ago
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only thing lower than a musician

or even a poet, even

are the people who feed their egos

at the risk of such desent...

You just get better and better

"femme cat" stanza was great; line length you are getting a handle on.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
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You're putting together some nice absurd insights lately (or should that be post modern?). I'm still struggling to get an angle to make some insightful criticism but your poetry keeps me reading to the end.

Another good one Don.

b'brig

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
since

the coming of age of video loves the radio star...image sells...am afraid ...you work just keeps me waiting for the next unique views...smiles/bluerains

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