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Brokeback Mountain


I was up on Brokeback Mountain
Watching two young guys make love
The clouds were grazing in the fields
While sheep soared high above.

The river flowed with lemon-milk
And trees were upside down
I noticed that my feet were wet
as rained poured from the ground

The deer were walking on two legs
and bears were small as mice
the sun was perching in a tree
and let off rays of ice

no things weren't right on Brokeback folks
the world had gone amuck
the only normal thing that day
was watching two men fuck

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