- Erotic Poetry
- Brokeback Mountain
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I was up on Brokeback Mountain
Watching two young guys make love
The clouds were grazing in the fields
While sheep soared high above.
The river flowed with lemon-milk
And trees were upside down
I noticed that my feet were wet
as rained poured from the ground
The deer were walking on two legs
and bears were small as mice
the sun was perching in a tree
and let off rays of ice
no things weren't right on Brokeback folks
the world had gone amuck
the only normal thing that day
was watching two men fuck
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 17 years agoThere is some pretty awful poetry(?) on LitE but this is not one of them.
This is good. Shows some talent and a great sense of humor.
LeBrozover 17 years agoA witty little piece, added late to the day's offerings;
Perhaps our poet had a bit too much of whatever it was that sent her mind way off. And, by the way,
Welcome to the Poetry side of Lit.
